Tuesday, October 18, 2011
December 6th of 1977 a little girl was born. If she were born a boy her name would have been Michael, but instead she was named Michelle. Michelle Nicole Hannans. Datona, Florida was her birthday place and English was the language that she was born into. Her mother's name was Saundra Crawley and her father's was Albert Hannans. She didn't stay in Florida too long; Just long enough for her mother to get tired of dealing with the BS with her dad; Six months to be exact...then off to NYC they went to stay with her grandmother, who helped raised her while Saundra was working. Boy did she(Michelle) love to dance and sing. Still to this day, she would get a natural high just singing in the shower. Still thirty three years before today, She would have never guessed that the world would be such a horrible and mean place to be. Who could ever imagine that a little bit on innocence could experience the traumatic chain of events that she would go through during the course of her life; forgotten innocence, yet we live and we learn.
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I do not really get what your trying to write, the context is not specific. I get the sense that you are building up to something and it cuts off. What i get from this is that this girl Michelle seems to be talented and she will experience some hardship. You should make it clear as to what you are writing about. I was into the whole building up of the story but I would make it clear in the paragraph as to what your writing about, for example in the book I am reading. And if the previous blogs were not there I wouldn't have a clue what this is suppose to be.
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